The 36 chapters of Good Writing
- Ch. 1Use Strong Verbsp. 13Checked by the app
Replace weak verbs, which are imprecise (walked, stood), with strong verbs, which are specific to the action described (limped, malingered).
- Ch. 2Question “Being” and “Having”p. 17Checked by the app
The verbs "to be" and "to have" are the weakest of all verbs; by nature static, they slow a narrative.
- Ch. 3Keep It Activep. 22
- Ch. 4Stick with “Said”p. 27Checked by the app
When attributing a quote, said is the right verb for attribution; the reader's attention is on who said it, not how it was said.
- Ch. 5Don’t Show Offp. 30
- Ch. 6Prefer Anglo-Saxon Wordsp. 35Checked by the app
Favor shorter, punchier Anglo-Saxon words over fancy, abstract Latinate words.
- Ch. 7Sound Naturalp. 40Checked by the app
Unless you're writing a technical manual, keep your language conversational and use modern speech patterns.
- Ch. 8Trust Your Voicep. 44
- Ch. 9Question Transitionsp. 51Checked by the app
Transitional phrases (then, next, when, meanwhile, however) are not needed unless a gap in time or logic has been opened.
- Ch. 10Link Ideas with Semicolonsp. 55
- Ch. 11Drop “Very” and Other Crutch Wordsp. 58Checked by the app
Delete the word "very" and other crutch words (such as: actually, really, some, basically, rather, important)
- Ch. 12Jettison [All Those] Tiny Wordsp. 62Checked by the app
Remove the clutter of short words (pronouns, prepositions, connectors).
- Ch. 13Dress Up “This”p. 66Checked by the app
Pronouns are hard for readers to follow, especially "this" and "it."
- Ch. 14Remove the Boring Stuffp. 71
- Ch. 15Refresh Your Wordsp. 76Checked by the app
Avoid repeating distinctive words within the same paragraph or close proximity.
- Ch. 16Know Your Words Inside and Outp. 79
- Ch. 17Stay In Tunep. 84Checked by the app
The better word is both precise and unnoticed. A thesaurus is your book of magic spells.
- Ch. 18Find the Hidden Metaphorp. 89
- Ch. 19Twist Clichésp. 94Checked by the app
Unmodified clichés bore readers. Twist them into something fresh or remove them.
- Ch. 20Knock Three Timesp. 99
- Ch. 21Stretch Outp. 102Checked by the app
Long sentences require attention to detail, conjunctions, rhythm, and a payoff at the end.
- Ch. 22Short Sellsp. 107Checked by the app
Interrupt lyrical or otherwise long passages with an abrupt, short sentence.
- Ch. 23Give Your Sentence a Finalep. 111Checked by the app
Even if you begin your sentence strongly, end it even stronger.
- Ch. 24Crystallize Your Dialoguep. 115Checked by the app
Dialogue needs to be as zippy and economical as the rest of the book.
- Ch. 25In Fiction, Archetype Your Charactersp. 119
- Ch. 26Show, Then Tellp. 123
- Ch. 27Give Them a Hero’s Welcomep. 129
- Ch. 28Once Is Enoughp. 132Checked by the app
Describe characters and places once. Avoid redundant reminders.
- Ch. 29Smell the Rosesp. 135Checked by the app
Use all five senses in your descriptions, not just sight.
- Ch. 30Don’t Filterp. 139Checked by the app
Show thoughts and feelings directly instead of filtering through verbs like "thought" or "felt".
- Ch. 31Trust Your Readerp. 143
- Ch. 32Layer Your Sentencesp. 147
- Ch. 33Write the Hard Stuffp. 152
- Ch. 34Break the Rulesp. 157
- Ch. 35Finish the Damn Thingp. 162
- Ch. 36Worship (Talented) Editorsp. 170